So passionate, strat 4rm the heart, loved it!!! ~speechless~ it shuld be 100/100!!
plz r8 nd cmmnt on mne..xoxo

Wow very nicly written,tons of emotion 5/5

Cool

This is really very sad. It brought tears to y eyes.

id give anything to change that day
the day you took your life away
didn't you know i looked up to you
now what am i supposed to do

Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

Omg thats crazy... Girl im seriously here if you need me

Right from the heart well done x

Thats a poem! Thats the way I wish all poems were. A powerful choice of theme but still keeping control of the poem on a language level. Either pure luck or genious. I like it, I shall watch your work with great interest from now on.

Drusus

Im so sorry about your friend.