Wow......thats sad. ur a good writter keep writting 5/5

Wow......thats sad. ur a good writter keep writting 5/5

Wow, that's deep. i had to think at the ending. there's so much emotions. keep writing:)

I like! Very good. And true...
A lot of emotion.
Definetely 5/5
(just so as to not confuse the reader. check for like spelling errors{i have some too} like...I gave my heart, my should to you,...kind of confused me.
But thats just grammatical stuff.
Your writing is excellent!

This was a great piece of work. The emotion behind it and the way you use words really touches me. 5/5

"You gave your heart again,
To one who doesn't care,
One who cheats and lies,
He'll leave you cold and bare."

Some girls are blinded or in a case i have first hand experience with, we go for the guys who we know are bad for us because we are scared of having someone mean so much..
I think thats it anyway
Great poem as always K
5/5
*gem*

Heyy this was very well written. had lot of emotion n meaning. xx