Comments : Pain..Lies..Trust..Die

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "It seems like I can't trust anyone,
    Every time I tell someone a secret,
    They turn around and tell their friends,
    I wish this shit would end."

    Awww, hun. This stanza nailed it for me. I've gone through this so much and it hurts & leaves me feeling so betrayed. Wonderful poem, keep writing! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by unique

    I know the feeling..stay strong

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    When I read the title for this poem, it is what really drew me into it and than the poem wasn't what I had expected. I had expected more of an angry poem than a sad poem. Nonetheless, it was a pretty good poem..a little cliched in with most depression poems, but not as cliched as most.

    Keep your head up Sweetie, and never frown because you never know who could be falling in love with your smile. =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I know the feeling, but I believe you can get past it. sucide isn't the answer, and yes it gets old hearing it. I loved the poem. you did an excellent job. so i am giving this 5/5