Comments : Heart and soul

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Yeah its really weird weve like only fought 1 time...well i just called him, and explained... he knew i went out w. drew, and he asked me if i still had feelings for him.. and i was like noo!! we broke up bc i didnt have feelings for him... and then he was like then why did he say he loved you?...adn i was like shane! i love you! i have never cheated on anybody and i never will especially you.. and he was really upset and i said well shane if you love me you'll forgive me... so it took him a minute and he said i love you... so i think were fine now.. but i need to make sure never to go online when hes here again haha... im just happy hes not mad anymore.. omg im soo relieved..commetn back

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Aww thats cute.. and i was worried something bad was gonna happen too..ahh im soo relieved... but yeah comment back!...you should so txt wil.. when me and shane hung up i was like i love you.. and he was like i loev you babe, and im sorry... it was so cute!! haha comment backk

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Imma go to bed.. haha...im madd tired, and i need to get up early tmrrw.. but commetn me back or w.e and ill get back to you tmmrw... bye<3

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    No i dont actually.. i have aim... but awwwwwwww thats sooo cute!!!!!.... hes so in love, you can so tell!!..yeah ill def. tell you about our date tonight... like hopefully its not ackward.. besides that my day was pretty good, boring and tiring haha...no softball or lacrosse for me today!! yeah yuh haha.. how was your day?...i left like 20 comments on this page too haha

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Oo thats cool!!...yeah but my aim sn is xoLAXox07... haha...im not online too much bc ive been really busy, and thats my new sn haha..but yeah ill im you some time if i go on...haha...comment backkk

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Im attempting to finish as much of my 2 projects before me and shane go out, because ones due on wed. and the other thurs. and i havent started either, and i have dance tmrrw from like 4 30 to 7 and then 7 30 to 9 for lacrosse...so yeah i like have to finish them like today haha..comment backk! haha

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Amazing how the ones we care for can make us tell all of our deep dark secrets even if we don't want to. I think because we feel we trust them it's ok, great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I like the comparison of love and a razor. Very nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    This is very good also.. Im about to delete all my poems yours kill mine lol... I love em girl great job...

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    You're way too much in cutting poems
    I think should stop thinking about it
    And this poem was so deep
    Well done
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Cute.. very simple words.. but it works nicely in this poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by dawn green

    Well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Love really is the greatest thing in life, but when it goes bad there's no greater heartache. This poem was rather short but I thought it was written very well and it keeps the reader interested the whole time. Excellent work 5/5 GG23