The wording was magnificent! The word structure of it was unique. It told the reader of a story, a sad story.

Thank you for sharing this with us. Bravo!

5/5 David

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Sarah! This poem! I love it so much!!! I don't even know what to say. it was just perfect! Please don't stop writing!!! Take care.

Love ya,

-` Liz

This is such a strong poem, beautifully sad... I really love it - the emotions were so clear, well done... !! 5/5 xxxx

Wow this poem is beautiful and I know I'm gonna be writing poems smilar to this one. And as I read each poem I get more and more curious about your past love life...

Very well writen...the last stanza finished of the poem very strongly...

Awesomeee