Comments : Light Source

  • 17 years ago

    by greggallo

    Theres one thing i want to say, great creativity i love this poem

  • 10 years ago

    by Alanis

    You have talent. Not very many people can pull off a rhyming poem as beautifully as you did.

    It rested on the mountains,
    Took residence in the heart,
    Devoured every dream,
    Tore every light apart.
    My favorite lines