Great poem, you write with such profound emotion, i love it. Guess this guy cut deep then...
I loved it.
Probs readin too literally at this point, but dont go for the knife, please. You'll feel better for like 5 mins, then its guilt, shame and pain after woulds. Been there and managed to stop before i got too into it.
Heh, cheers for the comment, i was right about some of my comments? like what?
keep it up
5/5
-Black night-