Thats a really deep poem i really liked it reminded me of WW poetry realy meaningful xx

It's so full of raw emotion, wonderful write, great flow, great choice of words!! It is just so sad, but at the same time, it has a sense of closure about it, great write, 5/5!
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

This poem is amazingly written, I love how the lines were kept short but the meaning is far bigger. I don't believe to poem offends at all. amazingly written 5/5

The repetition is wat i loved the most, the same line starting each time. but i guess that you either love it or hate it, others might find it annoying repeating so much but for me, i love it!

5/5 David

This was a great poem. I loved the repitition in it. In so little words was a big meaning. Good job 5/5

Wow, the repetiton was perfect, it was an amazing poem, definetely5/5
it was short, but the message got out perfectly, :):):):):)
luv gabriella

I liked this poem! I do not think it was offensive at all I don't really know why any one would take offense to it but anyways back to the poem...I loved the last stanza

Ninety-nine mothers
On handkerchiefs wept
In fright and sorrow
Of the family that left

I thought that was absolutly brilliant lol it showed a lot of sorrow and meaning like I could picture them just standing there bawling there eyes out atleast I hope that is what you wanted me to imagine this was an excellent poem I loved how you repeated the ninety nine men thing it was a great way to Rhyme with out being obsessive with the word if it makes any sence at all lol I also loved the part about the children just so angry someone could hurt someone they loved so very much I know what it is like and I can just picture the children in my mind I loved the part about slavery because I hate absolutly hate racism and you putting it in here was just absolutly fabulous because it flowed so nicely

Ninety-nine men
Fought for bravery
Not for patriotism
Or to defeat slavery

like woah how did you come up with that lol I loved the whole hiding behind timbers part because I watched a movie and that is what they did always hiding for things and reasons that did not need to be happening or be concerning with I think it is absolutly horrible and barbaric but
I loved your poem and the words and rhyming and scheem and everything nice job 5/5 kaila

This is sorrowful and beautiful... and that's why I love it. The flow seemed to work really well, and the message is strong. The lines were very short, but I was still able to feel the sadness of the children and mothers. I had to just sit and think after I read this, just so I could let all the beauty of it sink in!

Absoutely fine work at this so sad
You're good at dark poems
Keep it up
LAURA

I believe I've already commented this poem but I will do it again...I loved it then and Ilove it now...
my favorite part is:
Ninety-nine children
Remember their kin
And felt a swelling
Of anger within
I loved this ^^^
nice job

Touching, and so sad. I liked this one the best so far, the word choice the flow, the deep emtion everything fit togather perfectly. 5/5