Wow, I like your poem u got a lot of emotions in it....i give it a 5/5..... can u tell me what u think of my poems rate and comment them please

I really like that it seem like i was in that gurl shoes.

I thought it was really good but alot of it did not rhyme but it made a good point and was it true

i ha the same thing happen to me but i didnt kill them
um comment my poems apprectiate it so much

later much luv (valerie)

Wow.
intense.
but i absolutely loved it!
amazing.
Great job!
Bravo!
=]

I love this poem. I hope this didn't accually happen. 5/5. Very strong.