Seems a little more for a dark poem. Other than that, it was such a great poem. You used such great emotion and imagery in your words. Well done!
God bless 5/5
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You are an amazing writer...keep it up hun!

Wow, love, this poem was amazing. your choice of words flowed so well. i'd love to read more of your stuff; it sticks out to me. 5/5 def.