Comments : My Heart Broke For Humanity

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Everyday I wonder what it will bring
    There are two roads life can turn on
    And I whispered to myself today,
    Are we a proud civilization?
    Who ever wanted this?

    I pray for the day the world would see,

    This heart weeps for humanity.
    ___

    ^^ I effing love those lines. I love the whole poem!!! Its just djfahsdf. I love the whole "My heart weeps for humanity". You make me wanna write another poem like the one I wrote...lol. This is just amazing. I love every line. Maybe we should....trade poems...? Hahaha.
    5/5 Keep writing!!

    -` Liz

  • 17 years ago

    by Lucifers lair

    You make me really happy that you could write poetry! I love this poem. its a masterpiece!

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    A very powerful message within your words. Beautifully written from the heart.

  • 17 years ago

    by Karma Hope

    Very strong statements but executed nicely in this poem which made it enjoyable to read... =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason

    Exceptional job on this one. With so much sorrow and injustice in the world it is easy to see your message in this one.