Comments : Paper Cut Feelings

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Excellent poem, well written x x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow very descriptive this was my favorite part:

    Youve got killer looks and R-rated intentions
    Shes lost in daydreams of notebook hearts
    Quit reciting You and Me lyrics
    Because she cries every time that song starts
    Every time you make her scream
    I want to slaughter your photograph with darts

    it was wonderfully written nice job