So sweet but it would better if it was about me...jk

In the darkness, when Im feeling blue
I feel better when I think of you.

^Thats my favorite part.

The rest was all good too.

When together, you always made me laugh
By making funny faces or saying funny things
When I am with you I feel so great
When I am with you my heart flies on wings

^ That part seems a little less good. It seems too long to fit with the rest of the poem.
But over all, great write.