WOW! That was AMAZING! I forgot to come try to read your poems the other day, even after your comment. Anyway, this was a 10/5!! I LOVED IT!!! I LOVE history. I like to write/read historical poetry. I have one called "Freaks on Parade" about how, in Rome, the losers of a war were marched down the streets (in a parade) of the winning city/country and to a stadium to be brutally killed. Well, anyway, 5, BABE! This was GREAT! I'm going to read it again!
PV

This is a great write... Very well written!