Thats was a really rich peice. A poem that takes the reader on a flashback journey through a typical childhood. Very well written indeed. Keep it up.
Love.
-Thuggy

A beautiful fantasy filled with such descriptive imagery. I truly love this piece and your use of the words that were given to be used in this challenge was splendid. Well done Miko......

ps.... as Sunny stated, with or with the apostrophe's, it flows well and reads perfectly.

Wonderful inspiration. I feel this gives the meaning to poetry...your feelings were expressed thoroughly as a flashback. I enjoyed it.

P.S. This is the first comment I've made in months :) take care.