This is a great poem but very sad :(
I love the way you have expressed your feelings in this piece.

I guess i will pay price like this every night
Though you are the one who left me alone
Time might change a thing or two someday
But these evils won't leave me since you are gone

This stanza really rips at your heart.
Take care love your friend Cindy

I also adored the last stanza. Its awesome. I get speechless every time I read a new poem from you. I wonder how can someone create masterpiece after masterpiece. You're in the right track, if you were publishing I'd say you're in the right business. Well done!

Love
Michelle

Though you are the one who left me alone
Time might change a thing or two someday
But these evils won't leave me since you are gone

full of pains.. i understand the feelings behind it.. take care gr8 work

This is so sad and filled with so much emotion.
Great job.

Digging all my dreams deep beneath holy land
Capturing my soul and letting my flesh fly free

Burning my will to survive into ashes and dust
Memories of my love resurrecting like phoenix
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^^ Those lines just really got my attention. This poem was amazing. I love how you write...It all seems so easy and flows out so perfectly. 5/5 Take care

` Liz

Good write my friend. 5/5 from me. best wishes.

There are so many different aspects to this poem i absolutely love, your wording is superb and use of expression is fabulous, fantasic imagery too. well done.

Nicely done....love the imagery and wording of this poem....especially like the reference to the phoenix...

Burning my will to survive into ashes and dust
Memories of my love resurrecting like phoenix

5/5 from me....All the best, Debbie

Alot of emotion coming through in this poem. very deep. touching lines. xx

Wow thats a very powerful poem .The intensity and depth is so evident in each words.Very few writers posses such grip on theme nad words altogether.

Thanks nitin your comments are always so encouraging.

Good poem

I really love this poem... breathless at the end. you are an awesome writer. i really love all the metaphors. this one really got to me. i love it

Very well writen and wonderful description.

That was very, very, good. I liked it alot. 5/5

What a sad and heartfelt write. May time ease your pain. Nice job.

Great poem. filled with feeling. i love:

Wisdom is bleeding from the kiss of knife