Flow was brilliant! words were great! another fantastic piece of work! your poems are so good hun!!! god bless!

xoxo Lucy

Broken memory.

great poem.

5/5 david

Good job on this poem, the rhymes were great and the flow was good. I really liked some of the lines you had in this poem, it really had deep meaningful imagery.

"the broken sky won't let me fly"
Love it!

Hmmm im thinking just darkness but your title is good i like this poem alot actually i thought it had nice flow 5/5

Wow this is so powerful poem. Very unique and full of emotions. I suggest name Unknown misery. Your words are so dark and cool.