Wow.. This was absolutley beautiful. It was really sad, but really well written.. Frankly, I can DEFFINITLEY, UNFORTUNATLEY relate to this. I know how that is.. & You're right :] Age doesn't make any difference.. as long as you love each other. Who cares what every one else thinks? I know EXACTLY what you went through.

This flowed really well & I absolutley loved the first stanza.. It was very captivating.

Beautifully penned, Hun.

Bri x

This is so sweet and sad,
its gorgeous. 5/5
luv gabriella

A very cute, intersting poem. A fun read.

Um...... ARE U INSANE... ok... take it from me... do not love anyone olderthan 10 years... i was raped that way..

Hey great poem. its really cute.
dee

I admit that I don't like the thought of a 14 year old with a 22 year old, but when I was 16 I dated a 20 year old, and quite honestly he bugged me but he never pressured or took advantage of me. You might see in a couple years that it was a bad idea, or it might be one of those rare occurances where it really was just innocent love.

Anyway.. I thought it was cute and I can definitely relate to the feeling of being in someone's arms and not wanting to be anywhere else but that place. --
"I want him to hold me tight,
and never let me go."
I did, however, think it was a little too blunt for me and that these lines,
"and never let me go.
I want him to be there for me,
through the rain and through the snow."
were predictable. But overall I liked the poem and the way you described something so important to you that no matter what wandering eyes saw you knew that in your heart it was right. Good read