Comments : Legend

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a wonderful write. I really loved this.

    We are legends
    with stories to pass down
    for many years to come.

    These words are so true.
    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very cute poem. I like the word choice and how beautifully you have written it. It makes 100% sense and it is just flawless 5/5

    tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought this had a beautiful meaning to it..
    It flows well throughout and the imagery is beautiful, creates nice pictures in the reader's mind.

    The only thing I didn't like was that every stanza except one had two lines and the other had three...that kind of threw me off a little.

    But other than that, I liked this.