Comments : A world beond our own

  • 17 years ago

    by XxTearDropxX

    I love tis because its sooo true. if we lived in a wrold where we were all accpted there would be no more suicided people. i think that this is so well writen and you did an awesome job just putting it together. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mikayla

    I really like this poem
    if only the world could be like this
    but sadly, it never will be
    what a perfect world that would be...
    great poem i think wrote it with such passion
    mikayla<33