Comments : Free Killers

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    I really enjoyed it. I liked how you incorporated the current events with imagery of natural symbols and surroundings. I really liked the first couple lines, they were quite lovely and drew me in. I also liked,
    "dying at no cost
    ...freely kill our brothers
    "FIRE"
    I think those really got to the heart of the poem.

    One thing,
    "but what of those...what did we evcr do to make you hate us"
    That's where the rhyme scheme went off and sort of just faded away.

    Overall I enjoyed it, Good read