Aww that was cute and sad...gr8 job....5/5

Wow. Thats really good.
Its so sad.
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What a great poem, i liked the ending the most. had the most meaning and really capped off a great poem.

5/5 David

Aww, sad but good though! Hope everything works out for you :) 5/5 -Katie

Sad and really good too...i like it.