Hi!
This is a very good poem! I can totally relate to it, specially the 1st stanza:

Tired of pretending it don't hurt
wen you treat me like dirt
tired of knowing its going to fall apart at the end
cause u see me as nothing but a friend

The words flow together really well, good job!
Keep writing
Kay xx

I really like this poem and can really relate to it at the moment. 5/5

Really emotional and from the heart well done x