Comments : Demolition

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Awww the pain of heartbreak and the searching for the remnants of yourself you lose in course of giving your all.
    Beautiful write. Excellent Job. These are my favorite lines. So heartfelt.

    ^^No lingering reminder
    Of the love held inside
    Now empty
    Is the silence
    That faces me tonight

    Dixie

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    This is wonderful. It just flowed so prefectly. It really moved me.

    Tonight I cry
    As the walls of my heart
    Pulled apart
    And my soul seeped
    Through the cracks.

    Excellent job!
    Take care Cindy