Well, who was the collaberator?!
They must be damn good is all I can say!
AHAHAHAHAHA
We did good on this I think!

This is really good! :] It flowed really well & was just so beautiful. The rhymes were good & nothing seemed forced.

Lying here in your soft arms
Everything becomes so perfect

^ I think 'lying' should be 'laying'. And those were deffinitley my favorite lines.. So beautiful. & peaceful.

Never thought I'd find 'The One'
Now know it deep in my heart

^ The second line: I don't really like the way it's worded.. Maybe add an ''I'' after Now. Or something.

JUST MY SUGGESTIONS & OPINIONS :]

But i really loved this..

Beautifully penned, hun.

Bri [x]