I really enjoyed it. I think it flowed and the rhyming was used quite well. I like the inspiration you provided in the peice with the purpose to help realize thagt when things get hard, it's not the end of the world. Remember the better things.

I did however think that the beginning stanza wasw a little weak, and these lines "you wings and run fro cover"
should be "your" and "for" correct? (i know they're just typos I'm just anal about that)

And I thought the last line wasn't really powerful enough. I think it could have been worded better, it was a bit too long to really make an impact.

Overall though I really enjoyed it and I think you did a great job