Comments : True Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Jezzika

    Awww... this is the so sad! I love it it's very well written! Keep up the good work!

    @!Jezziak!@

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    And even if we're never together again
    I will wait until the end
    Because true love never dies
    I hope I'm not the only one who cries...
    ___

    ^ I love those last lines. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this poem. It's good that you were able to write down your feelings just how you felt them. ... The only thing that kinda threw the poem off was the structure. Well, that's something I don't think people can change quickly, but idk....it's just me. Other than that I really enjoyed reading this. Keep writing! 5/5

    ` Liz