Wow! Wow! Wow!
This is a masterpiece of what is to become.

To God we beg forgiveness, our suffering is too great.
All our chances are over, never to see heavenly gates.

Makes you glad that you are one with the Lord.
Excellent job!
Take care Love
Cindy

This is scary but i so very much loved your imagination power. You simply are very talented.

Keep writing

all the best and take care

Nicely done dark poem....5/5....love your work!