All those who know her wouldn't ask
Darkness hovers over her past
Pain clotted up her dreams inside
But sorrows still can't drain her pride
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^ that stanza was just. wow. this whole poem was incredible to me. i absolutely love it. you're an amazing writer, sarah. never stop writing. 5/5!

` Liz

Amazing poem i loved it. keep it up
dee

Your style and method are unique in the most amazing way...a talent that shines through no matter the subject at hand!!

You describe some one that I almost know. A piece that gives a glimpse into anothers mind, well done.