If you feel lost isn't it mainly because you want to be found? To see who will come look for you? Thats how I feel when I am lost. I think you're a pretty good writer, keep it up.

I notice you go sort of half-ass in grammar. You should go full out correct, or forget about it all-together. Some interesting, unique ideas mixed in with run-of-the line. I like these phrases: Lost in the sea, of names in faces (however, you should consider "a sea," instead of "the sea), twist and bend, lost smiles, new found fears and doubts.

A moderately strong poem. Good work.

Wow, thats AMAZING!!!! can I just say that I could NEVER write a poem HALF as good! (and o my goodness, peole are swearing. so alone......so alone......) u rock!

<3/sahara

Nice poem!
I liked it
Check out my poems plz and tell me what u think..Idk if my poems are good or not cuz no one has left a comment yet

You are really good! Keep it up! Oh and look> :) There see I am smiling at you!

Interesting Mo. Actually, I thought i was kinda sad by the end of it. The character feeling lost, makes me want to help. Written very well, keep up the nice work. This was very nice.