Great job!!

Aawww this is such a sweet poem.. i enjoyed reading it.. excellent job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

Awww... i love this one. i have only 3 friends i can really think about when i read this... great job on this one. its very well written. and thank you once again for the comments.

Awwwe...... That was sweet to write about you friend like that, i hope they relise how specail they are to you. on to the poem..... It could just be me while it is beautifully written some of the rhymes seem allitle forced, and it throws the flow off slightly, other than that this is perfect. you did a great job. 5/5

Nice! i really like it short but with alot of feeling ^^

<3~Shelly

Wow...powerful and expressive and beautiful...great way with words and rythms....you also had an amazing flow

----lots of love and luck, tara----

Amazing piece. I wish if I were your trusted friend. wow great..tc

The blossoms that bloom everyday
May blossom in your garden
The blessings that come every way
May bless you, take your burden

Awesomely great lines. Wow 5/5

Very cute poem written for a special reason and for a special person. Nice wordings and great flow. 5/5 from me :)

This is definitely a tale of true friendship.
The words r poetic n lovely.