Comments : I don't want to but i will

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Your poems are so amazing
    "Why do i bother to love
    when all you do is break my heart
    and leave me alone to die
    this s@#$ is tearing me apart
    but i have to leave
    i have to run
    before the setting
    of the sun"
    you use the perfect worddds to describe your feelings, and you make it flow so beautifully
    5/5
    gabriella