What a very powerful and emotional poem. its very well written. hope you are ok take kare xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I dare to say this is one of your best poems. Really really really good. You've put strong emotions in this one. I just luv it. ^.^
"...In a flash and a bang,
and it all goes dark..."

It's kay that you didn't leave a comment, dun worry. But a pity you can't read it. Anyway, I put up a new poem today, few more coming soon. :)
Take care
Much love, Br0k3n