I like the way u use your words in the poem, i can understand it

I really liked it. I admit that the beginning was a bit weak, but overall I enjoyed the read. I like how you portrayed the feeling of unconidtional love; even though you've been abandoned (perhaps?) and this person doesn't return your feelings, you still love and care for them. I think you described that beautifully and poetically, and I liked your rythm and format. A couple of my favorite lines were,
"I wish that you could see
What your words have done to me,"

"I'd cry for you,
I'd die for you,
Bleed dry for you"

suggestion though. In "I could never say bye to you" I think that "bye" should be substituted with "GOODbye" because the shortened version doesn't seem as impactful and messes with the rythm a bit.

Overall good job

This is good the same thing had happened to me before : (

<33 kriss