Thankyou!
was a bit worried about you falling to your death but im gald that the angels saved you just like i would save you if this poem was true
xx

Whoa. So did they really want to die?
I liked it. 'twas a really good read.

Happy writing-

Wow! This is really good. Good pace and good words. I kind of pitured it too. hehehe kudos!

Preety good... but its not very poetic... i changed it a bit so its more poetic and has the same general meaning

I walk the unknown land
My feet so bare I feel the sand
It's in the breeze, that awful sound
Or is it angels all around?
I feel the wind blow through my hair
I feel the angels watching stare
They see deep into my (blue) eyes
They seek out all my hopes and lies
They whisper as i walk on past
I speed my pace, I'm running fast
I see the cliffedge just ahead
But i don't stop, i fill with dread
I jump the cliff
I start to fall
I lose all hope
And then a call
I stop falling, you ask why?
The angels here wont let me die
They hold on dear to arms and legs
And then i'm rising to the sky
The angels whipers can be heard
As i realese a joyful cry

Sorry if i'm a little.. Critisizing? rude? but i read this and then this poped into my head.. i thought id let you know, just so i wouldn't be accused of plagerism or whatever if i posted this

Oh, and if you want to contact me, e-mail me @ sugar_high0803@yahoo.com

Wow this is great!