Comments : Hear My Plea

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    How very touching this is. A true friend is hard to find. This poem really moved me.

    Angry,
    Why care in the beginning when all the love turns to hate?
    Would I have poured out my heart if I knew this was our fate?

    Excellent job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Alone,
    Face in the hands that pushed friends away,
    Heart in the hands that have gone astray
    ^^^
    This beginnin

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Sorry .... stupid laptop is so sensitive ...bet you thought I fell off my rocker...lol

    Alone,
    Face in the hands that pushed friends away,
    Heart in the hands that have gone astray
    ^^^^
    The beginning words of this poem pulled me right in ... I wanted and needed to read more. The emotions set are strong.
    Very impressive!

    I like how you go through each feeling ....
    Alone
    Scared ...ect

    I am not a big fan of question marks in a poem but they seemed to work well with this piece.
    Wonderfully penned Courtney!
    Thank-you for sharing.