Your poetry always moves me the inner sadness can be felt in the words that flow from your pen :(

It seems you are better than me
Or may be i am invisible to you
Standing here for just one glance
Wondering if you will ever look through

Remember you are the best.
Love Your Friend Cindy

Another wonderful write, sadness mixed with tint of hopes can be felt in every words.
Nice job.

Nicely written, good flow and structure. Very interesting write....thought provoking....tinged with sadness....

Talking to you everyday in front of the mirror
Every single word of mine i feel so true
But you pass me by as i dont even exist
And i keep wondering if you will look through

Enjoyed this one....All the best, Debbie

I attest. Wisdom words with wonderful ways. I can think of only one thing wrong with this poem: it was so grand I wish it was longer. Superb, just superb.

-Rob-

Great poem. I thought it was the perfect length - to say what has to be said and leave the reader thinking/wondering about what they've just read rather than telling them everything down to the last detail - thats what makes reading great - you get to exercise your own imagination with other people's words! :)

Thanks for the chat the other day too.

Take care

Mo

May be i am invisible to you
Standing here for just one glance
Wondering if you will ever look through

i love this part, i feel i am living your words at times and then you pull me through it. fantasic poem xox

THe worst feeling in the world is to have a heart full of love for someone. and they don't even see you. very well portrayed my friend. 5/5

This was an amazing write. I'm speechless. I can relate to this in so many ways. Ah, I dunno what to say! I love every bit of it! 5/5!

` Liz

Its a very different one from your list I must say. But came out perfect. No matter what you write about, you portray the feelings really well. Keep it up.

Best Wishes
Michelle

Standing all alone in a crowded place
Just like one of them looking at you too
Holding your hand in my fantasy world
Wondering if you will ever look through

That was a great opening and my favorite stanza.
A great poem.

Such a sad love poem. This feeling is a feeling i know all to well.
You really hit the nail on the head with tihs piece m'dear
5/5
*Gem*

Hi dear!
gr8 poem as usual. i lovbed the last stanza and its words...........5/5

luv

I love it! great poem.

This is a really good poem. I really liked your first Stanza.

Please read and comment on one of my poems. Thanks
Nichole

Full of emotion. Nice job!

Hey, haven't been here n agessss!!!!
came to read ur poems actually..I'll try to read more

this was really cute, althou the idea wasn't that creative but it doesn't mean its not good
you did a great job, really!!!

Keep Goin'