Wow, very nicely written and touchy, a poem full of emotions, a poem which shows a reality, an unwanted reality.
but life happens and we do have to deal with its pain.
very nicely written. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

It's a very good poem... I loved it!

This poem is so nice. i really liked it. ur a very good writter. this poem is 4 a contest? then i wish u the best. keep up the good work. 5/5

This was really well written. it had a lot of emotion & it was very heartfelt. It was very sasd though. But I can definitely relate to it.

Beautifully penned, darlin'.

Bri [x]

Aww. This poem is very emotional. It just seems like it seeps through everywhere it can lol. But that's a good thing XD

As for the structure of the poem, it was done very nicely as well. It flowed nicely and it came to a good end. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This is one of my favorites. even thought it doesnt rhyme,i love it! it reminds me of someone..i guess thats why i like it cus i love poems that i can relate to. 5/5