Comments : I Dont Understand

  • 17 years ago

    by Babyesha Naveed

    Me too....IDU Y

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    I don't understand either... i guess i never will...
    nice poem, though...
    the repetition was nice, till the couple last stanzas...i think you ought to leave it one time than 3...it might just look a little better...
    it's your choice, though
    do what ye will...=))
    but, well...
    a poet should not be criticized...
    for it's thy emotions that speak...

    i think it's good to let your emotions flow...
    it makes me feel better, do not know if you feel better, also...
    and you end up with a nice poem...=)
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Izi

    I don't undertand either

    ~Izi~
    @(^_^)@