I think it's really cute. (and I'm waiting too. or trying to, go virgins)
I thought these lines were funny,
"I vowed to be chaste
-Until marriage that is.."
haha I love the dotdot...

I really like how you described love and devotion through keeping a promise, and a promise as life changing as "staying pure".
I did think though that the rhyming was a bit simple, and it was a little off in these lines,
"So, to show my thanks and admiration
I give my love and obediation."

Overall though I thought it was a cute poem and I really enjoyed it. Good job

Honestly, out of all your poems, this is probably my least favorite, not because its about Jesus or anything, but just because I felt it was written in a sort of juvenile manner. That being sad, I really appreciated the sentiment and the strength behind it and I wish you luck on your endeavor to fulfill your vow. That will be quite a feat!

"Jesus Christ died for me
-Very painfully, I might add
So, to show my thanks and admiration
I give my love and obediation."

true words^^
i love it.
5/5

~Chelsea

Great topic-its great to be active in what you believe. The use of some words are wring, such as sublime. In that context it has no meaning. Great flow, simple structure. Keep it up.

{4/5}

[PygmyPuff]

You believe in god. i love to know that. great poem. the flow was excellent!

5/5 david

Hey,
I dont really like this poem, can't really explain, i dont like poems about god and that kind of stuff, but nice try I still voted 5/5 because it just a matter of preference..
kisses stephanie

This was a nice poem the flow was done welland the image you wrote with a great affection to your religion good job Plot121...