Comments : The shadow

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Very well written poem and again i wouldnt change a thing,
    nessa

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I liked it, part of the flow seemed a bit forced, but it had an intresting twist at the end. Good job 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Twobit

    This is good! 5/5