Comments : Forever And a Day (The Anniversary Poem)

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Aw. Omg. that was so sweet. It was very romantic & just breath-taking! Such a sweet dedication to someone that you love. I know exactly how you feel.. Love is such a beautiful thing, sometimes :]

    I can't imagine life without you
    As funny as that seems
    Your face is in the sunrise
    Your laughter in my dreams.

    ^ I loved this stanza. It was so very unique & descriptive.

    I also really loved the part where you said 'I'll love you forever. Forever and a day'. I think that's what it said. I dont' remember exactly but lol. I loved that. It was really sweet.

    Beautifully penned, sweetheart.

    Bri [x]