Nice poem, very thoughtful, you have done a great job, keep it up.

I liked it although I felt kinda bored reading it spice it up a bit it will give it a little bit more umph 5/5 kaila

Wow, darlin'. That was just... so amazing :] It flowed really really well. & the rhymes were great. Nothing seemed forced. This had such emotion in it.. & such great meaning. What a sad day that was..A day that everyone will remember. I really loved the title of this. This has got to be my favorite 911 poem I have read, and I've read quite a few. Yours had such great, intense, vivid imagery. Just so beautiful & touching..

Simply amazing.

Bri [x]

Yep yep you are on my favourites. i loved this too. the description in it was electric!

5/5 David

Wow great poem
rearly captured the horror and disbeliefe of 9/11 in a very discriptive way
again great keep it up

Lucifer

Wow.. I'm left speechless.. I can't even begin to describe how awesome that poem was, sent shivers up and down my spine...just so gut wrenchingly emotional 5/5
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Same thing as last poem, long and kinda slow but still good...

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Wow ... this was just heartbreaking beautiful. You truly created the horrific scene clearly in my mind and I was hooked from beginning to end. I loved how in the beginning to described the normal lives of people, it made it so much more real. Your flow was flawless and the rhymes were not forced.

Well done *5/5*

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Another great poem... and very interesting