Very powerful, dark ,and scary. Well done.

I agree it is very powerful. And dark. The lines flowed smoothly for the most part and it was refreshing to see vocabulary that was rarely utilized. All in all great job.

Ben
great job on this write. Word choices and the imagery are excellent. You have painted such a scarey picture of the nearing of the end of this world as we have know it. Excellent job!

Pray our souls to Christ because our #$* is in the fire.
There is nowhere to hide, and their thirst shall never tire.

Loved this stanza!
Take Care Cindy