Youve based this poem on courage by Superchic [k] havent you? Lol you can tell by !I told another lie today' and 'I got through this day'. Anyways this was a really sad sad peace of writing. Yet i can really relate to it, food is poisen. I like the rhymes in it again, they didnt seem forced. I tthink you should use punctuation more, its a great tool, as i can read it the wya you want it to be read. Anywyas i know my poem "i just want to be thin" wasnt good, i dont even know why i addedt hat poem to the site really. Anywas keep up the great writing nad thank you for all of your ocmments! xx

Thanks hun for your comments.
You have good poems.
5/5
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Hello darling! i love this poem. it's so great, and so are you :D

This Poem was really good. I liked it. I cant wait to read more

Wow...i've felt like this many times before...ur amazing.

It's fantastic...
it reminded me of a friend of mine that almost died of anorexia...
really great poem...

*isabel*