Eek!! *shouts* I can't wait for part 3 this poem was killer intense!! wow suspensful I loved the begging stanza by the way it was wonderfully written

Thank you so much!

I am enjoying this tale of torment I am going on to read part 3.

Wow my friends think that's scary... thanks though!

Excellent work!!!!! i love that last stanza, ill be sure to follow up on the next part

great choice or whats, EXCELLENT rhyming, too often people will cram a non-relevant word in there to make it fit but you didnt need to do that, amazing..wow