Wow i like it!!!!

Hey, wow this poem was really great. And no your not alone, dont worry about that. But i do know thats what an ED makes you feel like. :(
Anywyas i can really relate to this read, thats what kept me engaged from the begiining till the end. The rhyming didnt seem forced and it all worked really well. The whole poem had a nice rhythem and flow. To improve i suggest you use a more varied punctuation and grammer. But maybe thats just me. Anywyas an excellent read, thank you for your comment, if you need to talk feel freee to PM. Take care xx

You have amazing talent. you're a wonderful writer. You capture my attention so well. i love it! 5/5!

WOW this poem is great I like it. It flows well and it has good word choices. Your not alone, anyways keep up the good work.

Great poem, I love the flow and the lines are different lengths but it still sounds really good. And it's really deep and not like cheesy or graphic or over the top or anything.... i like it, 5/5
- Polly xx

What a shockingly real poem! I mean, I liked how you wrote some things that people would be able to imagine, but then left some things a mystery to the reader like the whole 'Mia's little fighter' thing. I was really quite impressed.