Oh my gosh this was a wonderful write! It was very good! And sad I really wish she would've taken his love lol. I loved this poem though you did an excellent job keep up the good work! 5/5 love always kaila

Omg.. YOU HAVE ME ALL TEARY ;[ Lol.. This was so sad. But so very beautifully written. It flowed oh so very nicely & nothing at all seemed forced. I loved the repitition in this, it really brought the poem together [in my opinion].

The girl never saw him
In a world of perfection
Rejected the love
And a blind boy's affection

^ THIS STANZA WAS SO ABSOLUTLEY AMAZING. I'm serious. I wish I would've thought of that. aha. Idk why. It's just so beautiful & so very powerful.

Amazingly perfectly beautitfully penned, darlin'.

Bri [x]

Good poem i liked it 5/5 good job, keep it up

Actually one last thing, it was kinda long and kinda slow, but good, just a pointed though try to speed it up A LITTLE not to much, but other than that very good

Another great poem here. i love reading your work. it was very nice to read! always 5/5 from David