Comments : Deeper than the Oceans

  • 17 years ago

    by - Maria Yasmin -

    It's too bad I didn't get a second chance
    Because everything would be different
    It's too bad that you gave up so quickly
    You never took our love as anything more than romance.

    i like that part of the poem...it strikes me...very emotional...good job!

    - MARIA YASMIN -

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Maybe One Day You Will Put A Smile On Your Face

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Maybe One Day You Will Put A Smile On Your Face