I love this poem, I cant fault it in any way because I love it so much - excellent writing - you've got talent, loads of it. keep writing =)

Love this poem.. great description :D

O yeah
i LOVE this stanza

Frozen tear drops cried in winter
mind set to panic mode
as chaos slowly fills her life
from this broken abode

:D andiloveyou <3

Ah, so sad and so wonderful!
Great poem. the flow once again
was wonderful and the poem itself
was flawless. Well done.
God bless 5/5
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